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RWBY OC: Mary Anael by warhippie56 RWBY OC: Mary Anael by warhippie56
I was working on this the same time I was working on Calder. NOTE that this character has a somewhat mature back story. Mostly because I like more mature and darker characters. With that said, I hope you like it! Don't forget to check out my other OCs and feel free to comment.

Since you seem to really like this character, here is another picture of her: Mary Anael

Mary Anael
Age: 19
Weapon: Venus (Elemental charge lance)
Color: Maroon
Handedness: Right
Occupation: Student at Beacon, Leader of the team

Mary is considered very lusty. She's bold, flirty and could be very inappropriate. She is the center of attention for most of the male
students by wearing very revealing clothes. Even when it comes to the school uniform, she purposely does not wear the undershirt,
revealing her bra, and cutting her skirt extra shorter. Also, she would tease men constantly to get their attention. It is because of
this, she is the woman of every male's dream. The male students would do anything to be her boyfriend, but she would always play hard
to get which makes her even more irresistable. There are very few men that are immune to her charm. However, by the way she acts, you
may think that she loves guys but really it is quite the opposite. She despises men due to her past. Her constant teasing and her bold
attitude is a trap. She enjoys weaving men through her fingers. She takes great pleasure in seeing men squirm and do anything for her
but could never do anything to obtain her. To her, men are just perverted, arrogant idiots.

When it comes to men, she is quite popular. However, when it comes to women, they really don't like her. They consider her a "slut"
and the reason why men break up with their girlfriends; but to her, she considers it a favor to all women. She believes she is cutting
the chains that binds men to women.  Despite the hostility towards her though, she is kind to her female classmates. In class, she is
an average student. She does all her work, pays attention in class, and gets decent grades.Even though she hates men, she is intrigued
of Calder who is the first person she met at Beacon. In fact, he was the first man she was ever attracted to. She likes him because
unlike most men, he is able to resist her charm, and he is the first man she ever knew that treated her like everyone else (despite
being an attractive woman) with his cold personality. She would constantly try to gain his affection by teasing him and wearing skimpy
outfits but this time, she was not doing it to control him. However, these efforts always proved uneffective.

Mary's mom was a prostitute owned by an abusive man. One day, the mom accidentally got pregnant by one of her clients. According to
her owner's rules, no women owned by him is allowed to have a child. However, the mom did not want to give up her child so she kept it
in secret and named her Mary. Unfortunately, the mom's owner eventually found out about this and commanded the mom to kill her own
daughter. She refused, so instead he told her that her daughter is going to replace her and with that, she killed Mary's mom. From
there, like he said, the mom's owner raised Mary as a prostitute. She was constantly raped by her owner and men she didn't even know
at an incredibly young age. This made her have a strong hatred for men. By the age of 14, she was tired of living like that and wanted
to get away from those pigs. She was able to escape by stabbing her owner with a kitchen knife by surprise. After she got away, she
joined an all female bandit gang. This female bandit gang taught her many things about fighting, scamming, stealing, etc. By the age
of 17, she became a great fighter and manipulator. She and her gang would go out, flirt with men, tempt them with sex, and steal their
money when they were alone. They would also raid strip joints and brothels. By the age of 19, she attempted to steal from none other
than headmaster Ozpin. This broke out into a fight that lasted no longer than 30 seconds. Ozpin won but he noticed that she was
actually pretty skilled in combat and asked her to join Beacon. At first, Mary was hesitant but she accepted because she wanted to do
more than just live her life in a small bandit gang.

Fighting Style/Semblance:
Mary uses an elemental charge lance called Venus. What this means is that her weapon can unleash an elemental discharge/explosion
around her blade. However, to do the discharge, she must charge her lance with her own aura. The more aura she sacrifices into her
weapon, the more potent the explosion will be. She can also choose which element her weapon will unleash. In a fight she is very
versatile. She uses her flexability and looks to her advantage. When she fights, she purposely makes all her attacks very seductive
looking which gives her opponent cleavage and panty views. The way she fights somewhat resembles a pole dancer. How can her opponents
focus on a battle when they can't stop staring at her body? Her attack consists of either fast attacks or slow attacks. Her piercing
blows are fast, her slashing hits are slow but all of her attacks are very tricky due to her pole dancer style. However, she lacks
range. Her weapon is long but she has no potential in a true range battle and unlike Calder she can't reduce distance between her and
her opponent as fast. She is considered a very average fighter which is the reason why she is the leader. Good strenth, good agility,
go strategic level but amazing fighting style. Her semblance is called Last Kiss. This semblance allows her to take control over
anyone she kisses. The more attracted the person is to her, the longer the control. This semblance can range from none to 1 hour. She
will rarely use her semblance in the middle of a battle because it is very hard to kiss someone while you are going at it with
someone. She will mostly use it before a battle or for her own personal reasons. When she is in a battle with a male opponent, she is
pretty much unbeatable (unless he can fight with a blindfold). Against a female, her fighting style proves less effective but is still
a good distraction. Against a long range fighter, she will most likely need some help.

(I'll do this after I finish with the rest of the team.)

Named after virgin Mary (ironic isn't it)
Anael is the archeangel of love and passion
This team is based off of the seven deadly sins (well technically there are only going to be four)
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Jykell Featured By Owner 2 days ago  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
What team is she the leader of?
warhippie56 Featured By Owner 2 days ago
Im not finished with the team yet. Im still working on it.
Jykell Featured By Owner 2 days ago  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
ah alrighty
AeroTatsu01 Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Hm, among all the OC's I have seen around for RWBY, this one stands out to me in some ways. If you ask why, I probably wouldn't be able to tell you why, she just does. XD

But after reading all of her information, I must say, she is very well done for an OC. I can't see which of either her personality, backstory, or fighting style, stood out most, they were all well done and quite clever. :D

Heh, though I will have to say, against my boy Aero, she would find he is one man she will not be able to have an easy time against, nor would she be able to rip him apart from his girlfriend Rosalind. XD He's not exactly like other men, cause perversion is something he rather detests.

Heh, I don't mean to say that as, he's better than that, beyond that, she can't beat him, I just thought it'd be interesting to see how they would far in a one on one match. XD
warhippie56 Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2014
Haha glad you like her!
AeroTatsu01 Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Heheh, seeing cool and unique OC's is always something I like. :D
skyarmyrecurit1000 Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2014  Student Artist
very revealing *nose bleeds and I die*
warhippie56 Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2014
Haha! You're falling for her trap.:D (Big Grin) 
Is it bad I have a feeling that if she were to meet Cardin he'd make a joke on her surname? (Anael is pronounced similarly to Anal iirc)

Also, lemme take a wild guess for the other three team members:
Pride, Wrath, Envy?

In any case, I like the character. Interesting backstory and design.
warhippie56 Featured By Owner Edited Aug 16, 2014
Lol, actually anael is pronounced like azrael except with a "n" instead of a "zr" and Cardin wouldn't make fun of her, she's too hawt. Glad you like her though. :D (Big Grin) 
As for the last 2 characters I'm debating between envy, wrath, or greed
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